So many sights on the train here. The pregnant women left to stand, the businessmen carrying their worry in the same hand as their briefcases - leaving the other hand free for the newspaper, the old women making endless trips somewhere. Wherever do they go these old women? I dream of being able to talk to one of them, just one. She'd have something to tell me about this city I haven't felt yet.
Saturday, February 23, 2008
Flash fiction, tome 1
I hadn't been in the city long. Certainly not long enough to make it mine or allow it to penetrate me the way places sometimes do. I had taken its trains. I always start with that.
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Please tell me you had a verbal response to his rude remark.
Beth - it's fiction, none of what I wrote is true.
Figures - I was up most of the night with the baby and I feel like my head is in a fog. Once I re-read your post - clarity set in. But if it were nonfiction - it would have been fun to hear your response.
Baby brain fog, I know it well.
interesting petit poeme en prose.. and the whole problem of racism. Recongition of existence through the negative.. Who's afraid of the little bad wolf???
Kingba - Me.
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